Thursday, March 19, 2020

Slice of Life: Day 19--"Today I Almost Stole a Daffodil--Part 2"

This month I am participating in the Slice of Life challenge sponsored by the Two Writing Teachers website and blog. Join me!

Read Part 1 of the daffodil story here, if you'd like to! :)

Short story: I was so close to picking the forsaken daffodil from the empty school lot today, but my roommate used her teacher voice and told I was going to be fined. I didn't get to take it home today, but all our schools closed until May 1st, so maybe tomorrow?

A poem based on "This is Just to Say" by William Carlos Williams--read it here, if you haven't! It's a classic.

"This is Just to Say"

I have picked
the daffodils
that were in
the flower bed.

and which
you were probably
saving
for the children

Forgive me
they were so beautiful
so bright
and so cheerful

**No, I didn't pick them, but I thought this poem was the perfect fit for how I was feeling....and my possible legal defense in the future...? ;)



3 comments:

  1. That mentor text is always fun... and I think you’d get forgiveness. Especially since we all need bright, cheerful things right now.

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  2. Daffodils always make me want to pick them. They are so cheery. And I love your "This is just to say" poem. One of my favorites

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  3. You picked them!? I was wondering if you did... :) I would have done the same...too much beauty to not be enjoyed. What a playful "Part 2!"

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